A Toronoto Star editor who is, erm, disp…

A Toronto Star editor who is, erm, displeased with the news that his job might soon be outsourced took his red pen to the poorly-written, jargony press release that announced the cuts.

In a case like this, you might think the editor was deliberately picky and pedantic about style in order to make the press release seem shoddier than it was, but it’s hard to argue with the changes. Even the correction about splitting infinitives, which I always thought was a bit of a goofy rule, just says “try not to”.